Feedback 23 February 09

You are getting quite a lot covered but it seems disjointed.  Why bother to post so much analysis of Sin City unless you are going to derive inspiration from it?  How might its concerns and styling be developed in your work?  Remember to use the terminology you learned in Miss Mapp's lessons as you describe your own film-making: angle, shot, movement all have specialist vocabulary.  You also need to consider timing: the storyboard you filmed today really should have been uploaded by the end of the double lesson.